the characters in this book were not discribed very well it sort of tells more about wha they are like then what they look like. I think authors put characters in books that we like and dont like to get us connected to the book and get into the book more. the characters in my book are very interesting but hard to figure out. They are hard to figure out because it only says a little about them every once in a while, so you have to keep reading to find out more.

There isn’t that much conflict in my book. I think the only conflict in my book is when Leaf accidentally says that there are other people that pass though the forest, he didn’t want ten to know because he didn’t what them to leave.

Conflict is when something happends like; people vs. people, people vs. nature, people vs. society, and people vs. themselfs.

there is sort of a new character in my book but not really a new character, in the book she wrote all of the books bout he life in everlost, and what you have to do to stay safe. her name is Mary Hightower…

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