I think good writing is when the author gives a little bite of discription all through the book. I dont like it when the author puts a whole bunch of discription in the beginning and then there is nothing else through the rest of tthe book.
My book has a little bit of discription all through the book, but not much. my book is acctually very boring and very wierd. there is a monster in the book that uses the EverLost children as slaves. and all of the other children are scared of him because he sends out a slave to capture more children, and there are charectors in the book that i dont like but i think that the author does it on purpose so you will like the other charectors better and will like to read it.
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